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https://doi.org/10.5194/gmd-19-3193-2026
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Numerical strategies for representing Richards' equation and its couplings in snowpack models
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- Final revised paper (published on 23 Apr 2026)
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ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (13 Apr 2026) by Philippe Huybrechts
AR by Kevin Fourteau on behalf of the Authors (14 Apr 2026)
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This is a good paper, and I suggest that it will be publishable with corrections that are merely clarifications or editorial.
1
Vapour transport can also be important; it is only in line 79 that we learn that it is neglected here.
2
The highly relevant paper by Wever et al. (2014) is almost “in the last decade”, but modelling percolation of water in snow under gravity and capillarity goes back at least as far as Colbeck (1974).
https://doi.org/10.3189/S002214300002339X
27
Between bucket schemes and solving the Richards equation, an intermediate approach of calculating water percolation under gravity without capillarity is used in some models (e.g., SNTHERM).
74
Is this transposition to 2D or 3D arrays of 1D columns? Inclusion of lateral flows is not so straightforward.
81
If wanting to retain Fcond as a vector for generality, GMD guidelines require it to be printed in boldface. Alternatively, as it is a scalar in the 1D framework, the divergence could simply be ∂zFcond.
Figure 1
Does the inset serve any useful purpose? Mention it in the caption if so, and remove it if not.
234
There are models that allow liquid water in snow below the fusion temperature, e.g.,
https://doi.org/10.1175/2010JHM1249.1
https://doi.org/10.1002/2016WR019672
326
The harmonic average seems to be the natural choice, corresponding to adding the conductances in adjacent layers in series.
344
Models 4 and 5 have not yet been introduced.
397
It would be good to show temperature, density and SSA for this stratigraphy.
Figure 2
Where is the water that appears at the base of the snow before the surface melt water arrives coming from?
Figure 4
Why do increasing timesteps run right to left on the x axis? – not wrong, but unconventional if there is not a clear reason.
505
“internal ice layers” sounds like horizontal layers are being discussed, whereas I think it is actually vertical columns.
Minor corrections:
The text uses both “Richard’s equation” and “Richards’ equation”, and it is often “the Richards equation” in literature. Pick one!
Delete commas in lines 9, 24, 105, 144, 287, 348, 405, 473, 523 and 525
Semicolons are not required before numbered equations.
22
I’m not sure of the authors’ intended emphasis, but “likely” is not the right word here.
70
“requires determining and solving the equations”
124
Brackets around γ are unnecessary
138
“it is also necessary”
141
“on the liquid water content”
146
“a water-saturated material” or “water-saturated materials”
165
“even though”
“held still”
199
“applies to both”
202-203
“accounted for in the ice budget to properly close the mass budget”
210
“both melting and refreezing impact the snow density”
215
Do not start a new paragraph here.
226
“6 unknowns”
257
“parts of the equations behave differently”
259
“On the contrary”
260
“the snow is at its fusion point”
279
“has also”
286
“also depend on the values”
308
“the parameters”
315
“the appearance of overshoots”
336
1/cos γ
346
“or gets stuck”
349
“rewound”
373
“a day”
“an hour”
378
“budget solutions”
404
“longwave radiation”
405
“shortwave radiations”
421
Delete “of”
436
“Significantly increased”
442
“timesteps”
“understanding of”
450
“models 2 and 3”
452
“the other models”
457
“can be efficiently cheapened” (or “can be made more efficient” would be better)
467
“typically by an order of magnitude”
468
“with small timesteps”
475
“better in one metric”
5.3
“resolution” should be “solution” throughout this section
508
“shares”
54
“matric flow”