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https://doi.org/10.5194/gmd-18-8973-2025
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Modelling stratospheric composition for the Copernicus Atmosphere Monitoring Service: multi-species evaluation of IFS-COMPO Cy49
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AR by Simon Chabrillat on behalf of the Authors (05 Nov 2025)
This paper presents an evaluation of the IFS-COMPO model (applied in CAMS forecasts) version Cy49R1 simulations of stratospheric composition, with stratospheric chemistry represented by the BASCOE module. The evaluation is structured into a global assessment during a quiescent period (July 2023 to May 2024), polar chemistry during a series of Arctic and Antarctic winters, and the volcanically perturbed years after the Pinatubo eruption in 1991. The model performance is discussed in detail for ozone, water vapor, long-lived species (N2O, CH4), sulphate, and a suite of other chemicals.
Overall, I find this a valuable contribution for the community interested in simulating atmospheric composition and particularly stratospheric chemistry, which falls clearly within the scope of the journal. The paper is well written and structured, however somewhat lengthy (see minor comment below). I especially like the scorecard summary, which allows for easy identification of the relevant parts of the results, but would ask the authors to carefully think about the evaluation grades here (see minor comment). My recommendation is publication in GMD after after taking into account the following minor and specific comments.
Minor comments:
1.) Length of paper: Overall, the paper is a bit long. I understand that it is important to present and discuss the model performance for several different species. However, making the text more concise and reducing the number of figures could improve readability, potentially increasing both the paper’s readership and its impact. I don't have special recommendations here but would just encourage the authors to think about such potential improvements.
2.) I'm wondering why the model moist biases in the extratropical lowermost stratosphere (below about 100hPa) are not discussed at all (around L542). These are the largest biases in the profiles shown in Fig. 5, and are similar to known moist biases in climate models (e.g. Charlesworth et al., 2023, https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-023-39559-2), and in IFS have recently been shown to contribute to UTLS cold biases (Bland et al., 2024, https://doi.org/10.1002/qj.4873). I'd find it good to discuss these issues briefly here.
3.) Scorecard grading: I really like the summary of results in the scorecard in Sect. 7. But I'd suggest to be somewhat more careful with giving particularly high scores here, given the remaining biases in parts of the profiles. Such high scores could be misleading if quick readers don't look into specific details in the related subsections. A few examples where I'm sceptical about the choice of score are:
Fig. 19, U.S.: CH4, H2O, O3, ... show significant biases above about 10hPa (Figs. 4, 5, 9), so that I'm unsure whether "good performance" is suitable here.
Fig. 19, Tropical M.S./O3: Also in the tropical profile (Fig. 9) the bias increases above 10hPa, such that I wouldn't rate the performance "very good".
Fig. 19, Mid-lat. M.S./H2O: For H2O the mid-latitude correlation in Fig. 5 is very low, so that also here I'm wondering about the "good performance".
Abstract, L30: "very good performance for O3, HC4, N2O and H2O..." perhaps too strong given the remaining biases in parts of the profiles.
Conclusions, L1019: "very good performance for CH4, N2O and H2O" I find too positive.
Related to these comments, it's not obvious to me that ACE-FTS is the better reference dataset for stratospheric water vapor (as chosen in Fig. 19 grading). MLS also provides a very good stratospheric water vapor product, and compared to MLS the IFS biases are generally larger.
Specific comments:
L138: How is the volcanic injection of sulphate species treated in the model? Would be good to mention here or point to the relevant place in the paper.
L212 (Fig. 1): I don't understand the distinction between SO2 in CB05 and BASCOE. Please clarify in caption or text.
L225: The variable "c" in Eq. 11 needs to be explained.
L403: I agree that the highest mean age values in the stratosphere are below 10 years. However, age spectrum tails extend well beyond. Hence, the statement "oldest air encountered in the stratosphere" is not correct and should be changed.
L507ff: How is the upper boundary condition treated? Can't this also be a source of bias in the upper stratosphere? Please add some explanation and discussion here.
L524: Adding age of air tracers to IFS would indeed be very interesting for future work.
L890: What means "By elimination..." here?
Technical corrections:
L72: ... CAMS was upgraded ....
L101: Lagrangian
L142: blank between "aerosols as"
L197: Cy48R1 - there are also other places where the "R" is lower-case (e.g. L201, L375, etc). Please check the entire manuscript again.
L307: one "solar" too much.
L403: "oldest age" sounds awkward, better "oldest air" or "largest/highest age values", etc.
L415: Would change "Let us compare..." to "In the following, we compare ...", or similar.
L431: Would change "It will be interesting to see how..." to "It is a particularly interesting question how ...", or similar.
L664: blank missing "inthe".
L691: number missing: "~150 and ~hPa".
L748: "in the two control runs".
L804: blank missing "afterwardan", and better "afterwards ..."
L884: blank missing "quitesimilar"
L894: Just simplify to: "To conclude, IFS-COMPO ..."
L939: "stratospheric"
L962: blank missing "theagreement"
L983: blank missing "thisunderestimation"
L987: "Northern"
L1044: "spring"
Figures 4, 5, 6, 7, 9: Is the legend labelling of red solid and dashed lines correct? I guess the solid line should be Cy48... (not Cy49...), as for the blue lines?