The authors have carefully taken into account most of my remarks / comments and answered to all of them.
Below are remaining minor revisions, most of them being related to previous comments or to new informations brought by the authors in the manuscript.
« LERC » ([Zonato et al., p. 9](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=9&annotation=GYFEBTHE)) Never defined before. Please define what is this step / phase
« This should be interpreted as a diagnostic downscaling of a city-scale daily UHI amplitude according to local morphology, not as a claim that atmospheric UHI variability is physically resolved at exactly 2 m. Coarser or spatially smoothed UHI fields remain a future sensitivity test » ([Zonato et al., p. 10](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=10&annotation=IIQK59B8)) In my opinion, it is not only that it is a diagnostic downscaling but a limited diagnostic downscaling since it might take into account that air temperature does not vary as much as it can vary with the proposed model (you might for example use a moving average of about 500 m to limit this local effect).
In areas with a single tree pixel (which is quite unrealistic I confess), the SVF of all your pixels will be close to 1 while the difference between the pixel with the tree and the other pixels will be quite big. Thus the result is that air temperature between 2 close-by pixels can be high which does not reflect the reality. In the added text, it is not clear that the limitation of the 2m air temperature is mainly related to the vegetation fraction which is a very local calculation.
« P denotes the vertical temperature operator » ([Zonato et al., p. 10](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=10&annotation=GJLXDUPI)) P for profile ???!!
In Equation 3, not sure P is an ideal letter to simply understand the equation. Shouldn't be T + a correction term ?
that takes into account the elevation ?
Moreover, P is not directly related to the rest of the Equations afterward. Maybe it would be simpler to have the resulting Equation fo deltaH>0 and deltaH<0 below lifting condensation and the combination of (4) and (5) in the other cases ?
« domain-average urban roughness length z0,city from buildings and trees » ([Zonato et al., p. 11](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=11&annotation=AAYBMEGB)) How z0 is calculated ? More specifically, are buildings and trees taken into account the same way for the calculation ? And how trees are considered ?
One tree patch (containing several trees) = max tree height ?
« wake » ([Zonato et al., p. 11](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=11&annotation=HB4MKSB7)) Why using wake here ? In Röckle model types, wake is a reference to a specific zone located downstream the building. You use directional wind reduction both for upstream and downstream zones right ? Thus using "Directional wind reduction model" might be more appropriate ?
« the Röckle wake model » ([Zonato et al., p. 11](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=11&annotation=SFHZYMEJ)) I would rather write "of Rockle type models such as described in..."
« wake » ([Zonato et al., p. 12](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=12&annotation=W6U23FRB)) same as before, replace by something like "wind-reduction models" ?
« This differs from URock, where vegetation drag is represented without adding the same building-like upwind and wake zones used here. The additional upwind and leeward zones are a diagnostic GLIDE-SOL extension, motivated by the physical expectation that porous tree canopies induce upstream adjustment and coherent downstream wakes, as also shown in recent isolated-tree wake experiments (Grandoni 350 et al., 2026) » ([Zonato et al., p. 13](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=13&annotation=TL38XXPW)) I think slightly more literature references might be added here. QES-wind has its own wake model for isolated trees (Margairaz et al. - 2022). They only appy it when the tree is outside the upstream or downstream cavity zones and only consider the tree height as impacting the tree wake zone. They show that a cavity zone might also be added since it has been shown in several observational studies. I think some of these informations might be added, if not here at least in the discussion.
Margairaz, Fabien, Hanieh Eshagh, Arash Nemati Hayati, Eric R. Pardyjak, et Rob Stoll. « Development and Evaluation of an Isolated-Tree Flow Model for Neutral-Stability Conditions ». *Urban Climate* 42 (mars 2022): 101083. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.uclim.2022.101083.
« Within each contribution, overlapping wake factors are multiplied » ([Zonato et al., p. 14](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=14&annotation=BJXGIIU2)) Multiplying building wakes seems relevant but I wonder about multiplying tree wakes since then tree input data may have a quite big impacts if trees are separated by a single pixel ? Not sure there is a need to consider this comment however... =)
« Station labels are colored according to the observed Local Climate Zone » ([Zonato et al., p. 16](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=16&annotation=75EJPSTU)) The legend overlap. And it seems the circles for LCZ are not colored while they are in the legend
« Example wind-reduction coefficient field » ([Zonato et al., p. 17](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=17&annotation=C8CQBFVR)) Is adding the high-vegetation cover alter a lot the readability ? Because I suspect it might explain many suspicious wind reductions in some areas.
« with specific windfactor formulations » ([Zonato et al., p. 30](zotero://select/groups/2490050/items/R8CYSF2R)) ([pdf](zotero://open-pdf/groups/2490050/items/IAUDXNW5?page=30&annotation=PVY49SAJ)) You may add that currently, there is no building-lie upwind/leeward influences zones |
Dear Authors,
Thank you for an interesting read and use of the SOLWEIG-model. A full workflow using GPU-enabled technology for Tmrt calculation is proven to be very efficient for this type a 2.5D-model. Many of you know me as the creator and maintainer of the SOLWEIG-model and based on that, I would like to add some comments regarding the setup and results produced. I must confess that I have only done one read-through, so some of my comments might be explained in the text already. Sorry for that.
1. Please improve the description on the settings using the model as this have large implications on your results and the interpretation of your findings. You state that you are using v2022a and this includes anisotrophic schemes for the long- as well as the diffuse shortwave sky. Did you implement these settings? Also, did you use the Reindl et al method to partition diffuse and direct shortwave radiation from global or did you get that from ERA5? More details are needed! Especially since the settings could be an explanation to your bias in Tmrt shown in e.g. fig 7, especially in dense urban areas because of the anisotrophic skies (Wallenberg et al. 2020; 2023)
2. Using this version of the model requires the correct referencing which should include Wallenberg et al. 2020 and 2023.
3. You are using black globe temperature sensors to derive Tmrt which needs to be discussed further. Did you calibrate these against more accurate observations and if not, do you think the bias in e.g. fig 7 could be explained based on this rather that my points in bulletpoint 1?
best wishes,
Fredrik Lindberg
Wallenberg, Nils, Lindberg F, Holmer B, and Thorsson S. (2020) "The Influence of Anisotropic Diffuse Shortwave Radiation on Mean Radiant Temperature in Outdoor Urban Environments." Urban Climate 31 (2020). https://doi.org/10.1016/j.uclim.2020.100589.
Wallenberg, N., Lindberg, F., Holmer, B., and Rayner, D. (2023) An anisotropic parameterization scheme for longwave irradiance and its impact on radiant load in urban outdoor settings. International journal of biometeorology. https://doi.org/10.1007/s00484-023-02441-3.