This study proposes modifications to surface albedo representation in the ORCHIDEE-CROP model during leaf pigmentation changes and crop residue phases. The impacts of these changes on surface energy balance are analysed, and potential implications for Soil Water Content (SWC) under present-day and drier climate conditions are inferred.
While the modeling choices are generally reasonable, the proposed modifications do not convincingly demonstrate consistent improvements compared to the original ORCHIDEE-CROP formulation. In some cases, model performance appears to degrade, and the added complexity does not appear to translate into robust or statistically significant improvements. As currently presented, the manuscript would benefit from clearer methodological justification, more rigorous evaluation against the original model, and a more quantitative and transparent assessment of improvements and limitations.
I revised the manuscript up to Section 3.3 and recommend major revisions. Should the revised evaluation become more convincing, I would be happy to provide further feedback on the remaining sections.
Below, the authors may find some suggestions for methodological improvements. However, the authors are also encouraged to explore additional paths to improve model performance beyond the specific suggestions listed here.
Major comments:
L122-136: It is said that 2 sites use a different methodology for calculations of albedo. The authors should try this methodology on the other 8 sites, compare the results and make sure that it is a reasonable approximation – this information should be added in the SI. Also, it is mentioned that data are quality-controlled and gapfilled, and if I remember correctly these dataset come with quality flags for the quality of the measurement or for signaling gapfilling. Did the authors filtered the data based on this information? I wonder whether using only measurements flagged for good quality could improve the final performance.
L147-150: I disagree with this approach. Using rainfall from the driest year, while the other variables vary means that decoupled quantities are being used, which is not physically realistic. Meteorological fields should be allowed to change coherently, and then the effects that the authors find interesting should be isolated via statistical methods.
L162-167: It is true that LAI measurements are sparse at ICOS site. However, I suggest that the authors use the locally available information to correct the MODIS values and match the locally shown variability and range (after all, a max LAI=2.5 is quite low for wheat in my opinion)
L257-258: This sentence is unclear. Does it mean that sowing and maturity dates are determined via GDD and then a number of days after maturity is added so that the observed/modeled harvesting dates match? If that is the case, it is then not guaranteed that modeled sowing and maturity days match with the observed ones. An evaluation of this aspect is also required, as I imagine this would affect calibration of the parameters related to leaf pigmentation (and also beta_4 and Z_0). Is there a reason why the authors didn’t force STICS to use observed dates instead of the ones determined via GDD? An alternative could be to retrain STICS so that sowing and maturity provided via GDD match the observed sowing and maturity dates.
L291: why is beta_4 assumed at 50% and not calibrated on observations? Picking a value in the upper range can lead to exaggerating the effects on Esoil. If I remember correctly, the selected sites should provide measured LE fluxes, which could be used to calibrate this parameter.
L375-380: The results section should start with the inferred parameter values, and their 95% CIs. Evaluation on albedo predictions should consider also the performances of the old model: how far do the improvements go? I suggest to modify Figure 2 to include both the predictions from the new model and from the old model (with another color), so that the evaluation can be presented coherently. Furthermore, this section should include the evaluation of Tsurf, H and LE: instead of presenting Figure S9-S10, the authors should conduct an evaluation similarly to the one conducted in Figure 2. This one should also quantify performances of the original model (ORC-D) and of the modified version (ORC-AE).
L386: ORC-AE does not capture alpha_surf evolution at all sites. It is quite clear that the new model leads to a degradation of albedo estimates in two out of five instances (De-Geb2014, FR-Aur-2019). The authors should state this clearly in the paragraph and should better quantify improvements and shortcomings.
L405-436: It seems to me that there is virtually no change in any variable during foliar yellowing. What the phrase as “slightly lower” should be better phrased as “no change”, given also the large variability shown. Residue covering shows some larger effects, but it wouldn’t seem like it’s significant. The authors are requested to better quantify statistically the inferred changes (statistical significance), in order to understand better the extent of the effects of the changes they made in ORCHIDEE-CROP. Furthermore, this section is quite number intensive and hard to follow – I suggest that the authors find alternative phrasings to present their finding. Also, I believe that percentages are seldomly relevant in this context.
Minor comments:
L144-145: I don’t see any reason behind using CRU-JRA at the two ClieNFarm sites rather than ERA-interim – why did the authors decided on a different product in this case instead of using ERA-interim data corresponding to those two locations? The authors should uniform the data across all sites, but if they decide to keep this different meteorological input, they should justify their choice adequately.
L151-167: I suggest aggregating subsections 2.1.3, 2.1.4, 2.1.5, because they are very short. I’d instead merge them in a unique section (called, for instance, “Management practice, bare soil albedo and LAI”).
L220: I thought that the von Karman constant was more around 0.40-0.41. Why using a value this different from what is typically used?
L316: does the value reported indicate mean +- SD? Looks like quite a wide range. Does this come from only 33 values, correct? The authors should not indicate SD, but instead the 95% CI for the mean: I imagine the distribution would not be normal, so I suggest to compute bootstrap CIs. Same goes for the value in L320.
L317: “This delay is close … of 14 days.” Is this to state what the old model is doing? Please better clarify within the paragraph what are the settings for the old model and which are the settings for the new one.
L375-376: the authors claim that R2 of 0.54 is a “good performance”. The adjective is not appropriate and should be reconsidered. Good compared to what? Other models in the literature? Compared to the old model? One could argue that 0.54 is far from being optimal.
L386-387: is FR-Gri2018 in the testing dataset? I thought there were 5 sites and a total of 5 years for testing, but I see that there are 5 years being presented in Figure S4 (and one of them is not FR-Gri2018, but FR-Gri2020). The authors should clarify this aspect. If FR-Gri2018 is in the calibration dataset, Figure 3 can be safely removed, and Figure S4 should take its place instead (with all panels).
Style comments:
L22: The sentence “However, the latter aspect is not yet covered by existing cropping system models” sounds a bit too final. I don’t have enough knowledge on the current state of crop modeling regarding this feature, but I suggest that the authors leave this sentence only if they are 100% sure about it.
L56-57: there’s no need to start a new paragraph here
L70: “Winter wheat … reflectivity”. This sentence doesn’t sound right, as it suggests causality and intentionality where there is none. A sentence that simply describes the species would be enough.
L150-152: Table S2 is mentioned before Table S1. The authors should switch the tables in the SI so that the ordering is correct.
L166-167: What does “but not S2” means? Does it refer to site measurements?
L281-284: Equation formatting needs to be improved
L304: Equation formatting needs to be improved
L311: “between these two phases” instead of “between them”?
L330: not sure if “parametrized” is the right term. Do the authors mean that the new values were included in the new ORCHIDEE-CROP version?
L337: what does “-D” stands for here? What about the other acronyms? Please specify
L341: maybe use ORC-beta_4 instead of just ORC-beta
L370: y overbar is missing
Figures and tables:
Figure S2. In the supplementary there are no limitations. The authors are invited to show more of the years and sites available (or, even better, a summarized evaluation)
Table S1. Wrong date format for tillage
Table 1. This table needs to be simplified greatly. Authors should indicate with just a tick whether there are modifications with respect to the original version or not, and then add in the caption or in footnotes what these changes mean only if they differ with what is described in the methods text. |
This manuscript investigates the effects of leaf pigmentation changes and crop residues on the surface energy balance of winter wheat, by improving the ORCHIDEE-CROP model with dynamic albedo, soil evaporation, and surface roughness parameterizations. The study is clearly presented, methodologically sound, and provides valuable insights into biophysical processes often overlooked in land surface models. Some aspects, however, would benefit from refinement: The site-to-site variability in residue effects (on evaporation and roughness) deserves more explicit discussion of limitations. The treatment of uncertainties and sensitivity to input data and climate scenarios could be expanded. Figures are informative but some captions and explanations are too brief; adding interpretive detail would improve readability. Overall, the work is solid and novel. I recommend minor revision before acceptance.