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https://doi.org/10.5194/gmd-19-3075-2026
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Landslide-Tsurrogate v1.0: a computationally efficient framework for probabilistic tsunami hazard assessment applied to Mayotte (France)
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The present article presents the Landslide-Tsurrogate v1.0 framework, an open-source tool, based on the generalized polynomial chaos expansion approach, for probabilistic tsunami hazard assessment generated by submarine landslides. After the description of the technique, an application to the Mayotte (France) study case is presented and discussed.
The topic is of interest to readership of the journal. The manuscript is in general well written, although a reorganization of the manuscript is strongly recommended (see following comments). Nevertheless, the manuscript presents some important issues that should be addressed before recommending the publication. Specifically:
1) Insufficient description and discussion of a crucial aspect: the deterministic simulations. While the mathematical framework that forms the Landslide-Tsurrogate v1.0 framework is carefully presented, the description and discussion of the deterministic simulations are inadequately addressed, while these are crucial for building and applying the probabilistic framework. Reading the manuscript, it appears that the choice of the numerical model to be used for the deterministic simulations is largely inconsequential, as is the distinction between 2D and 3D simulations, regardless of the specific characteristics of the site at hand. In my view, this represents a severe oversimplification. Depending on the considered site, 3D (or 2D multi-layer) simulations or may represent the only option to have reliable results, while in other cases also very simple models can be safely used. The choice of the model and its accuracy in reproducing the complex physics of landslide-tsunami generation, propagation and interaction with coast play a crucial role. These aspects should be better discussed as in the current version of the manuscript are not properly addressed. Moreover, the deterministic simulations rely on several crucial (sometimes arbitrary) assumptions: i.e., landslide locations, volumes and composition, rheological parameters, shape, extension and geometry of the failure surfaces, etc. These are characterized by huge uncertainty. Since the surrogate models builds upon the deterministic simulations results, these assumptions, or, more importantly, the criteria used to select the input parameters, are crucial. These aspects should be better discussed in the manuscript as in the current version of the manuscript are not properly addressed. Finally, it is clear that the surrogate model is highly computationally efficient. Nevertheless, a very important information to be provided is the exact number, or a detailed discussion on the criteria to select the exact number, of the deterministic simulations to be carried out (in general and for the considered study case) and their computational costs. These aspects should be specifically quantified and discussed for the considered case study. In any case, it would be important to provide guidelines for the application of the framework.
2) In its current form, some parts of the manuscript read more like a user manual than a scientific paper. This is not merely a stylistic issue; rather, the presentation does not adequately convey the points of novelty, nor does it sufficiently emphasize the limitations and/or the assumptions of the proposed framework. Some sections (e.g., Section 3.2, Technical description) are not particularly relevant from a scientific perspective. Similar considerations apply to Figures 4, 5, and 13. In my view, both Section 3.2 and Figures 4, 5, and 13, should not be included in the main manuscript but rather provided as supplementary material. Therefore, I strongly recommend a reorganization of the manuscript aimed, on the one hand, at avoiding the “user manual” effect and, on the other hand, at emphasizing the novel aspects of the present work.
3) The limitations of the present framework are not adequately presented or discussed. This aspect also relates to point 1). While the proposed approach appears useful and promising, like any model it is affected by limitations and shortcomings. These should be more thoroughly discussed and clearly emphasized, particularly in view of applying the framework to generic sites rather than only the considered case study. I therefore recommend explicitly describing and discussing the limitations of the approach, possibly in a dedicated section or subsection.
For the above reasons, I recommend a major revision of the manuscript before recommending it for publication.
Specific points:
L79-80. “Since monitoring such landslide-generated tsunamis is not currently state-of-the-art, achieving this goal necessitates a numerical modeling approach.” It is not clear what the Authors meant with this sentence. Please, explain/reformulate/remove.
L80-81. “However, executing ensembles of landslide-tsunami simulations in real time is computationally prohibitive.” It is not clear to me why ensembles simulations should be performed in real-time. PTHA is based on carrying out many simulations before the potential event, aiming at exploring the uncertainty in the parameters space. Based on the results of the PTHA real-time simulations might not be computationally expensive. In fact, they are currently used for Tsunami Early Warning Systems (TEWS) purposes.
L308-310. “The balance between numerical cost and accuracy is thus constraint by the availability of computational resources which, practically, plays a crucial role on the choice of the numerical model and simulation setup.” See comment 1).
L663-665. “Across all zones and most locations, landslide volume emerges as the dominant contributor to output variance of the maximum elevation and speed, with its sensitivity index typically approaching or exceeding 0.75. This finding underscores the central role of landslide magnitude in determining tsunami hazard intensity. The landslide location shows variable importance depending on the region and metric.” These are expected and well-known aspects, not new findings of the present work. Please, reformulate/remove.
L692-693. “An important aspect of the Mayotte submarine landslide test case is the emphasis on user-friendly interfaces (Fig. 13) that allow both researchers and decision-makers to interact with probabilistic tsunami hazard data efficiently.” I am not sure about the usefulness of Figure 13 as it is not clear the scientific content of the figure itself. See comment 2). I suggest removing this figure and/or providing it as an appendix/supporting information. The same considerations apply to Figures 4, 5, Section 3.2 Technical description.