Articles | Volume 18, issue 23
https://doi.org/10.5194/gmd-18-9293-2025
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Calibrating the GAMIL3-1° climate model using a derivative-free optimization method
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AR by Wenjun Liang on behalf of the Authors (10 Nov 2025)
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This well-structured manuscript presents a novel approach for climate model-tuning and the results that such tuning yields for a given model (GAMIL3) under 3 different model configurations: 1 year AMIP for tuning , 10 year AMIP and 30 year coupled pre-industrial Control. The presented tuning method is potentially relevant for other climate models. The authors show that the DFO-LS method is able to systematically improve the ‘a priori’ model parameter values and that the improvements hold across the different model configurations. The text is well written, with some potential however for more precise and less verbose language. In general, the manuscript could improve by adding some comparison or references to similar past efforts on model tuning, but I acknowledge that often findings and results are quite model-specific.
Specific comments
L45-46 Some references would be welcome.
L186: Not strictly necessary, but perhaps having a sketch showing the sequence of experiments performed would help the reader.
L186: The text has no literature reference for GAMIL3. If no documentation exists for this model version, a more detailed description of it would be needed, as an Appendix if needed. The current description between L187-203 is vague and full of ambiguities (‘updates to the planetary boundary layer scheme’, ’GAMIL3 integrates several parametrizations recommended by CMIP6’)
L280: Is there any reason or reference why you would give twice as much weight to C_i than to C_0?
L296: put the definition of the Jacobians in context. Why are you presenting it? where in the paper is used?
L351: Why ke and captlmt are explicity mentioned? please explain
L414: Any illustrative example of compensating errors in the model?
L503: I’d re-name this section as ‘’Coupled model evaluation’
L521: lower rhcrit could, a priori, also enhance precip. Lower rhcrit would enhance convection and, this, precipitation. Even if it is not the case in the simulations, it may be worth being mentioned.
L533: contributing to the decreased low-level cloud fraction and further reducing precipitation (since this was mentioned in the previous paragraph)
L569: Describe for how long the coupled model was run, one can only infer it from the Figures.
L569: for coupled simulations it is quite relevant to explain how the land, and specially the ocean, were initialized. This is relevant because a perfect model should drift if the ocean is not correctly initialized, and you would not like to tune your model to compensate for an ocean-caused drift.
L575: While the reduction of OLR is obvious (and interrelated) to the drop of T2M, the reduction in RSR seems to have a more complex mechanism and would merit an additional explanatory sentence.
L718: a leak of 1.4 W/mw seems quite relevant to me, and , besides being present here, it should have been mentioned earlier in the results when discussing NETFLUX.
L727: Mention that the primary experiments where 1 -year long AMIP
L740: the maintained improvement over extended periods is good news given that you tuned on a single year and ignored interannual variability. Could you hypothesise whether (and how much) you would expect a better tuning if you optimize the parameters over several years of AMIP?
technical corrections
L51 difficult to understand the complete sentence. Perhaps ‘carbon cycle or nutrient cycles’ would clarify it.
L60: remove ‘computational constrains’ as it only adds confusion to the sentence
L239: ‘discussed in a later section’. Please state at which specific section.
L250: listed in the first [instead of last] column of Table 2
L254: listed in the first [instead of last] column of Table 2
L273-L277: Break the sentence, it is difficult to follow. L288-L291: assuming there are no typos in the equations, there is inconsistent information in these lines: N is defined twice and differently, and C is defined although missing in the equation.
L357: why not just mention total number of iterations, instead of excluding the first 10?
L403: remove ‘’an
L464: variables
L475: this is less succesfull, in relative terms, than the 10 parameter case.
L486: exhibit similar behaviour L603: which improvements for which case?
L606: flux of energy towards the ocean, instead of ocean surface flux.
L691: a common issue
All figures: larger legends would be good.
Table 2: add units (if they have) to the parameters, as it may help to understand their role.
Figure 2: the numbers written in the experiment color code are very hard to read. Also, the caption does not explain what they mean, nor the meaning of the vertical dashed lines in b) and c).
Figure 3: I would rename AMIP@10years by AMIP2005-2014, here and wherever mentioned in the text.
Figure 7: there is a red ‘v’
Figure 8: percent instead of precent
Figure 12: change colorcode as it uses the same as Figure 7. In Fig 7, however, the numbers in the Table display the actual Jacobians, while here it displays the range between Jacobians. A change of colorcode would help explain that we are not looking at the exact same metric.