Dear Cameron O’Neill and coauthors,

Thank you for submitting your considerably revised manuscript. I am satisfied that you have addressed the reviewers comments adequately, and in doing so significantly improved the manuscript, and as such would like to publish your manuscript.

Before we publish this, please can I ask you to go through a further round of editing the text. Much of the new text is well written, but certain sections are not. The readability would benefit significantly from proof-reading/editing by the full team of authors. Please can you also ensure that the statements made in the new sections 5.1-5.3 are evidenced - this should simply require additional references back to figures etc. presented earlier within the manuscript.

Thanks you again for your resubmission, and I look forward to publishing the work after I have reviewed the minor revisions detailed above.

Kind regards,
Paul Halloran (Topical Editor)

Dear Cameron and team,

Thank you for the final round of changes. These fully address my suggestions, so I'm pleased to recommend publication of this manuscript without further changes.

Thank you for your patience with the review of this manuscript. Kind regards,
Paul Halloran